Water

This is is my contribution to Writing 201 – the Haiku 

Water

whitefeather1

Wanted to be free

to float down to the soft water

Now trapped in my wish.

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5 replies

  1. Oh, this is so powerful! That last line… very good.

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  2. This would work on its own, but having the image attached to the haiku makes it all the more powerful. Nicely done!

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    • Thank you. From the moment I took the photo over three months ago, the thread was there for the feather. Oddly enough, when I wrote the haiku tonight, I didn’t notice I had changed the subject form the feather to me at the end. Only after I posted it.
      Was an interesting challenge and great that you chose water. I live beside a lake. C

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