This is is my contribution to Writing 201 – the Haiku
Water
Wanted to be free
to float down to the soft water
Now trapped in my wish.
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Categories: Water haiku poetry writing 201
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Lardeau Valley Time 
Oh, this is so powerful! That last line… very good.
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Thank you very much. The idea had stuck in my head ever since I took the photograph.
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This would work on its own, but having the image attached to the haiku makes it all the more powerful. Nicely done!
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Thank you. From the moment I took the photo over three months ago, the thread was there for the feather. Oddly enough, when I wrote the haiku tonight, I didn’t notice I had changed the subject form the feather to me at the end. Only after I posted it.
Was an interesting challenge and great that you chose water. I live beside a lake. C
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It is indeed addictive!
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